/spams the comm with more TRC 28 edits

[jlarinda.livejournal.com]

There're a few more that were unnoticed o/ And one of them has a bit of new dialogue, too, so it'd be great if someone could translate it?



All volume scans are courtesy of shunkanidou 8|b

I'll link to the scanlations 'cause I'm lazy |D I do have the raws if anyone needs them, though?

- The original raw
- The edited page for the volume. Look at Syaoran and Sakura o/ ... I much prefer the original ones, actually, but I guess CLAMP wanted them to sadface until Kuro talks to them.

- The original
- The edited page. Tiny edit is tiny! Look at the Syaos' and Sakura's expressions.

- The original
- The edited page. Don't think I need to point out things for this one. This is the one with the new dialogue - I get the gist of what's being said but an accurate translation would be awesome.

- The original
- And the edited pages A & B.

I'm pretty surprised at the amount of edits total, specially considering volume 27 was left just the same.

Comments

願いを叶えましょう。

[starlady38.livejournal.com]

Clone!S: Nevertheless,

Even if I was punished, I wanted to live with Sakura.

And

I wanted to protect

A precious person.

You're different,

In name and in form.

Moreover, you're not a created being.

Even if I was created, if my existence disappears, the world will shake and ripple.
There should be a fissure born there.

[jlarinda.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much~

[cherry-tiger.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for this! I was planning on buying the tankouban and thus I didn't bother to download it.

But wow... look at those changes. I think the one that really iffs me is the first change that you pointed out. I'd much rather see Sakura and Syaoran's sad smiles (cause at least it shows they're happy to be reunited) than those sad frowns... as though they regret being able to return (maybe not the case but I just saw it that way).

The second change makes it a bit too dramatic but at least the two Syaos don't look alike so much. XD (ALWAYS that same face, Syao?)

Whereas the third and fourth change is actually pretty good, the lengthening, even if it's little, helps a lot especially on the last one.

But the last tankouban turned out to be the one with the most edits. XD That's interesting.

[jlarinda.livejournal.com]

No problem!

I think they were just kind of afraid of what the others' reaction would be. Maybe they'd be mad that they had kept their true identities from them all this time :/ And then Kuro goes and is all Dad on them and THEN they smile.

And yeah, I loved the last two edits. I felt that Dad!Syao had a much better "death" this time, and I really loved the fixing of Wata's and Real's scene because it seems to fit the one we'd seen in HOLiC more.

[clamp-hikari.livejournal.com]

o.o so many edits. I am kind of use to edits but I did not expect any from CLAMP of all mangakas. The first time I knew this was happening, the mangakas had inserted several new pages and deleted several in the tankubons.

[jlarinda.livejournal.com]

It's not the first time they do this, they've edited pages for the volumes in TRC, HOLiC, etc :x

[nekocat17.livejournal.com]

Thanks for listing all the comparisons! That's really interesting to see.

[snoopygirl11.livejournal.com]

Lol they added Watanuki getting his glasses back XD I'm surprised at the amount of edits...thanks for the scans and comparisons!

[sailoryue.livejournal.com]

wait didnt watanuki get his glasses back likea long time ago in xxxholic?? O_o